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Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul - 3/9/2010 11:56:50 AM

Wheldrake

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Steel weighs heavy on the soul.
The collar girded round my neck,
The belt locked tight about my loins,
Are not mere tokens of control:
Their coldness binds my very core,
For steel weighs heavy on the soul.

A turning key may be a gate.
A half-twist of a woman’s hand,
So gentle and so merciless,
Became the portal to my fate,
Forbidding all thought of return.
A turning key may be a gate.

Her whisper stings me like a lash.
I leap, obedient to her whim
And lay my body at her feet.
No barked command, however brash
Could spark surrender so profound.
Her whisper stings me like a lash.

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RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul - 3/9/2010 3:45:05 PM

jezzybelle

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a very powerful and enjoyable read....

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"Come to the edge," He said.
she said, " I am afraid".
"'Come to the edge", He said.
she came...He pushed her...
And They flew.....

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RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul - 3/10/2010 9:06:53 AM

simplyWicked4u

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very well written...hope to read more in the future....

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RE: Steel Weighs Heavy On The Soul - 3/10/2010 11:07:01 AM

Wheldrake