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easyoutlaw -> RE: Little Emily (7/3/2010 2:01:45 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: divi quote: ORIGINAL: easyoutlaw quote: ORIGINAL: domiguy everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck. Is little emily huge? Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser. No, she is not. She is described in the story as quite diminutive. The story is named for a member I knew on alt who actually did have "Lil' " as the first part of her name. The character is based on her. She is 5'2" tall, has a great body and a ROCKIN' ass. So, . . . no. I slammed dunked the last person who called me 'Fonz.' Do I need to do it to you? Chubby Chaser? Well, . . . sometimes. But only if it's YOUR MAMA! lol.. heya fonz.. thumbs up I've decided I love you more than my own life, divi.

loveydovey -> RE: Little Emily (7/3/2010 2:23:52 PM)
The essence of the story was well written with a creative eroticsm and i commend the Easyoutlaw or aka "Foniz" for his talent with words. My only critique was that it didnt flow well i had trouble grasping the dialogue differences between act and thought.

Handler222 -> RE: Little Emily (7/7/2010 8:04:20 PM)
You're a genius.

divi -> RE: Little Emily (7/8/2010 2:21:02 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: easyoutlaw quote: ORIGINAL: divi quote: ORIGINAL: easyoutlaw quote: ORIGINAL: domiguy everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck. Is little emily huge? Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser. No, she is not. She is described in the story as quite diminutive. The story is named for a member I knew on alt who actually did have "Lil' " as the first part of her name. The character is based on her. She is 5'2" tall, has a great body and a ROCKIN' ass. So, . . . no. I slammed dunked the last person who called me 'Fonz.' Do I need to do it to you? Chubby Chaser? Well, . . . sometimes. But only if it's YOUR MAMA! lol.. heya fonz.. thumbs up I've decided I love you more than my own life, divi. awwww Fonzi!!! That is sweet!! I hope you didn't do anything drastic... I would be crushed :(. What about Pinky Tuscadaro???????

waxygrrl -> RE: Little Emily (7/26/2010 7:32:26 PM)
I enjoyed your story immensely. I have only begun to browse the postings here, but I have been quite disappointed so far at the abundance of poor grammar and spelling, and the overall lack of structure. I found no issue with your dialogue or flow. Thank you very much for sharing.

Chrisincuffs -> RE: Little Emily (7/26/2010 11:00:51 PM)
quote: everyone on CM that has "little" or "lil" as part of their name is bigger than a truck. Is little emily huge? Fonz, you strike me as a chubby chaser. Domi, how about you write a story now? Cuz really, I don't know where you come up with this shit, but ya make me giggle

MistressA25 -> RE: Little Emily (10/20/2010 11:38:28 PM)
Really enjoyed the story! Maybe we will see more soon!!

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