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What are my three slaves reading, or have read once and reading again, a future possible slave wishing to read it, and the last ten days many subs that are trained by this Master are reading it or buying the book or downloading onto the kindle for $5 about GBP3.00p.
This book demonstrates a woman’s mind Well, this is certainly the book which everyone is talking about, this book is extremely sexually explicit!!
What is ideal that certain scenes leave absolutely nothing to the imagination. This Master loves this book, it challenges men , I spoke with a medical professional man who has just realised his female partner has read it, he was muttering ,, quite red faced saying “ I frankly think it should carry a verbal warning on the cover, there are lots of rude words, and I found the whole thing to be crude, filthy and somewhat disgusting to be honest, don't say I didn't warn you, but then again, I know nothing of sex, I am only a Gynaecologist.”
This Master joked, indeed it is women and bdsm you know nothing about, this man reminded this Master of the British Gynaecologist who got sued by his female patient back in 2006 or maybe 2009, she was given multi-orgasms , at least two orgasms, by the randy Gynaecologist in less than two minutes,. Sue him, this woman should have married the clever man, the nurse was standing close by, also but this woman claimed that her reaction was involuntary, the Gynaecologist was known to this Master by name as the Hospital in Droitwhich Spar is just up the Motorway from Masters City,
The woman said her legs were jumping all over the place, what an orgasm, needless to say the case failed, the presence of the chaperone nurse saved the Masters butt, she was paddled and caned later for being such a good girlie, and an excellent chaperone.
So we must accept now that Gynaecologist’s know little about sex, so back to what all these women are reading, Fifty Shades of Grey.
Without spoiling the book for you, the story is basically about a wholesome city girl, just out of college, who falls for this super-rich crazy Looney nutcase control-freak with a big secret, just like this Master but unfortunately is not super rich, all his finances have evaporated on his slaves. . She learns what the secret is , which will not be revealed here obviously and she then has to decide whether she can live with it and have a relationship with him, great stuff, story of this Masters life. Towards the end of the book the interest greatly picks up, with the crazy control-freak seemingly opening up a bit and telling the lady some of the secrets of his past. The graphic and very explicit sex scenes are what the women love, poor Grammar so one would imagine maybe this Master wrote the book, but he did not, but may consider doing so, in the future. There are also volumes II and III , of Fifty Shades of Grey.
Masters one sub read this in 2 days and found it overall entertaining, what a snob this sub is however, she commented that she found herself intensely irritated by the repetitive prose - Holy Moses, Holy Crap, Inner Goddess, Subconscious, not to mention all the running of hands through hair, clenching, tightening, quickening, blushing and bloody lip biting, what a little shit she is , she paid the price for such snobbery. The storyline , a damaged male and an innocent female, some possibilities for a genuine love story and psychological development of characters, want to find out what will happen to Ana and Christian, so read the rest of the trilogy.
Master sub with her nose so high in the hair, and no ring or chain to support it, said that with better editing, more mature prose and a little more rounding of characters, plus less repetitive descriptors in the sexual scenes, as this got too predictable, it could have been a 5 star for her, this Master felt almost has hurt as her bottom felt, he is always accused of writing in a way that needs serious editing, its clear this Master has a future in writing, it is so controversial..
So to recap , Fifty Shades of Grey , for all the leaden, wooden, repetitive, frequently juvenile-sounding prose, and the profoundly un erotic sex scenes, this book Fifty Shades of Grey is so awful that it's brilliant... in an unintentional kind of way. as our `heroine' took one look at Christian Grey's grey eyes (yes, really) and his messy hair, and the way his trousers hang "in that way" (what way?) and literally falls flat on her face in front of him. Clearly smitten by her cute innocence, Christian of the grey eyes, sculptured lips, and spicy scent is soon whipping out his little "foil packets", his riding crops and hand-cuffs, and giving our previously-virginal Ana multiple and seemingly instantaneous orgasms, all of which are "shattering".
Women particularly enjoy, it appears the way Christian manages most of his sexual exploits either fully-dressed (just a quick unzipping and a coy fiddle with a "foil packet") or with his shirt (always white linen) still on, while Ana bit her lip, and breathed `oh my!' for the umpteenth time. Take this Fifty Shades of Grey serious or provide hours of derisive laughter.
So what is this to do with the Topic, a lot really, the orgasms are so intense in Fifty Shades of Grey , there was ample mention to write a iv (fourth) book all about “sub drop” and what is now important, this Master has got some good reading material to read while he is waiting for his slaves or sub to cove out of her LOW…………………………..??
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