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My only requirements are total submission and obedience both sexually and domestic

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ORIGINAL: lizi

Yes, I remember your other threads from the past and had even given you advice way back when. I'd have to say your profile has improved quite a bit since then but there are still a few things that would turn me away. In the profile text telling people that those looking for online, part time, or who are experimenting that they aren't committed is your opinion and a negative one. You have struggled with being overly negative in the past, couldn't you just say there that you are looking for a full time D/s relationship and leave it at that? Why slam others in the process of stating what will work for you?

Then the journal entry saying it's bad manners for a slave not to respond to your polite inquiry...no, it's not a given to have strangers respond to emails around here. Because men act like asses and get abusive if you tell them no, so it's easier to just not respond. If you'd like that to be different then you'd have to talk to the men that use this site and tell them to stop acting like nasty children. Also, you may think your inquiry was polite, what if it wasn't to her? Does she still owe you a reply? Why? You're a stranger and not in any dynamic with her, yet. Someone calling themselves a slave doesn't need to respond to the ones calling themselves a Master until they've decided to be a part of that. Would you want a slave that is a slave to anyone at all?

The other journal entry on slaves having needs and wants....well, yes, they have them. And they will be choosing relationships that fulfill those needs and wants. Why would you think that someone's sexual orientation meant that they didn't have needs and wants? That is ridiculous. You mentioned twice in the entries that you wish you could just buy a slave to get what you want, to me that says you don't want to put in the work for a relationship. Slaves are people, slaves get to be selective, especially in the beginning since after that they're looking for the other person to take charge - a slave needs to choose carefully then right? Why shoot someone down because they are selective? If your daughter were a slave would you want her to choose her long term relationship carefully or just do whatever those "Masters" out there tell her to do? Would you want her to end up with someone who respected her and her place in his life or someone who just wanted to buy her from a market because she looked good?

As before with your other intro threads, you seem to be genuinely interested in sharing your life with someone and want that to work, but you seem to be very set in your ways. Not that it's wrong to be like that, but I do think it's cutting down on those who might be interested in you more than the job and your age. It's the attitude. I will say though that things are different in this profile version and are definitely more positive.

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ORIGINAL: 15speed
I am very aware of the abuse that most have to deal with on here, and wish that it was different. But courtesy and politeness, in my opinion, help to define a good slave regardless of the conditions

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ORIGINAL: BurntKitty

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ORIGINAL: 15speed
I am very aware of the abuse that most have to deal with on here, and wish that it was different. But courtesy and politeness, in my opinion, help to define a good slave regardless of the conditions

I'm going to address this point as the others pretty much gave you spot on advice regarding the rest of the profile.

The people you are contacting are women first, then slaves. As soon a a woman logs on, the messages begin pouring in. I might have one waiting when I log in, but 3 more suddenly show up, and I'm not looking for a mate. It's even worse for the fresh meat new users.

Think of it as this: it's unsolicited mail that really doesn't have to be replied to if the woman doesn't want to. Do you really reply to all messages you receive on your outside email account? How many times do you get the "bigger penis now" or "discount cialis" and don't forget the "£300 million inheritance" scams we all receive on a daily basis. It isn't disrespecting you by not replying, so try not to feel that it is. The fact you are asking for help in tweaking the profile shows you're open minded in looking for a better advert for yourself.

Best of luck. By the way, a closeup of the horse's face would have won me hands down. I fell for my guy because his pics showed his love of animals. He had his dogs & cats as well as a collection of dragon figurines. (I loooove dragons.)

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Then I get to the bottom and you just lost any woman you had a chance with. Simply because you contradicted yourself. You say you want someone to be comfortable in their skin, then you talk about your fantasy woman. I can't tell you what an INSTANT TURN OFF this is.