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Violate me - 1/26/2005 7:16:08 PM   
atHisfeet


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My mind is a canvas that shows the purity and simplicity of my soul.
Yet when I am near you I find myself covered by a naughty image.
Slip under the cover and waken my flesh, release my soul.
Devour my innocence and leave me craving more of you.
Feed me only of yourself, let me drink you in thus becoming one with you.
Violate my purity, take it, bend it ...

I give myself to you Master.
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RE: Violate me - 1/27/2005 5:38:39 AM   
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That was beautiful thanks for sharing!



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RE: Violate me - 1/27/2005 4:16:09 PM   
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it does touch - thanks a lot

hug and kiss

petra
(white snowflake in the ghetto)


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for Him - 2/1/2005 7:02:00 PM   
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your lips are my music
my flesh feels their tune
my body moves in a trance
the world is spinning
you are taking control
kiss me


you're the one i've been searching for
i have needed to lose myself for so long
strong arms holding me in place
like an infant in the womb you encase me
the power is yours
take me


desire lust and raw emotion
you'll not hurt me any more than i will hurt you
satisfaction lies within the element of pain
let your inner self go wild
i trust you
bind me


your hands explore my body
i close my eyes
you watch me drink you in
you feel my muscles contract as you fill me
you could be my everything
release me


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RE: for Him - 2/2/2005 3:19:15 AM   
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This poem says so much! it is wonderful thank you!



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RE: Violate me - 2/2/2005 4:13:14 PM   
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Yes yes, great indeed. It's great to be seeing a wonderful poetic writter on the boards.

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RE: Violate me - 2/6/2005 11:07:08 AM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: FangsNfeet

Yes yes, great indeed. It's great to be seeing a wonderful poetic writter on the boards.



i blushed. thank you. i have a lot more and actually submit to another site but i figured since He comes here He may enjoy seeing it here as well.

again i thank you for the compliments
Hisgirl

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RE: Violate me - 2/28/2005 10:31:29 AM   
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There is a vast difference between writing words and writing what O/one feels. I think I've just got a glimpse of how you feel about Him. Thanks for sharing the love.

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RE: Violate me - 3/1/2005 11:13:46 AM   
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quote:

ORIGINAL: SirSTRYKER

There is a vast difference between writing words and writing what O/one feels. I think I've just got a glimpse of how you feel about Him. Thanks for sharing the love.



quietly i say thank you, but love is something he and i try not to speak of.

he means more to me than he should.

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