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Pain - 5/16/2004 9:48:33 PM

sweetobsession

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it's been a long time since i havent written any poems but i came across this board and figured it wouldnt hurt me none so here it goes

Pain

Pain is when you love someone when they dont love you
Pain is looking into someone's eyes or sensing their feelings and seeing them surrounded by darkness with you not being able to pick them back up
Pain is watching someone who you fell in love with turn into a completely different person right before your eyes
Pain is when you talk to a person and they are cold towards you when you did nothing wrong
Pain is something that will make you stoop down to so low of a level that you arent sure how to rise above it
Pain is watching the one you love love someone else and act like they care about you when they are just trying to be polite to you

Pain is watching your child having to go through surgery and be in pain themselves and knowing that there is no way you can stop it
Pain is something you feel when you believe to have found your soulmate only to find out that he or she is meant for another

Pain is watching yourself slowly seep into darkness and not being able to fight the pain in order to stop it

Pain is where you watch someone go from being your Master or Mistress to being completely vanilla and killing of their dominant sides right before your eyes

Pain is something that a slave goes through when he or she submits to someone only to have them to turn them down like their submission was nothing to them

Pain is something that you cant control and that could bring you to your knees time and time again

Pain is my life and will be conquered when the time is right but until then it is jjust pain and I facing each other and one day there will be no pain and that will be from the peace of moving on

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RE: Pain - 5/17/2004 6:32:01 AM

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wow - deep, powerful, and moving

thank you for sharing your pain with us

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RE: Pain - 5/17/2004 7:10:48 AM

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and thank you for taking the time to read this Sir :)

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RE: Pain - 5/17/2004 7:34:33 AM

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thank you for sharing your heart.Some day the Pain will diminish

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RE: Pain - 5/17/2004 8:17:11 AM

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thank you hun

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thank you for sharing your heart.Some day the Pain will diminish

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RE: Pain - 5/18/2004 9:55:34 AM

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Reading the words posted
Im curious sweetobsession
are you writing from self
experiance or is your poetry
simply the visions that come
to you? Sum times when
sumthing hits home to others
so deaply the reader forgets
that sum times the writer puts
to paper thoughts and not
experiances so I am currious
being a writer My self if your
writing is
experiance prevoking or
thought prevoking.
BTW it is very VERY good
and you should write daily
regardless of where it came
from. ~smiles~

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RE: Pain - 5/19/2004 5:51:27 PM

sweetobsession

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thank you Ma`am and actually this is from all my experiences some of which i am still going through..i used to write everyday but then i started having writer's block and quit writing poems and stories until now, and thank you for taking time out to read it Ma`am it means alot to me

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ORIGINAL: MistressDREAD

Reading the words posted
Im curious sweetobsession
are you writing from self
experiance or is your poetry
simply the visions that come
to you? Sum times when
sumthing hits home to others
so deaply the reader forgets
that sum times the writer puts
to paper thoughts and not
experiances so I am currious
being a writer My self if your
writing is
experiance prevoking or
thought prevoking.
BTW it is very VERY good
and you should write daily
regardless of where it came
from. ~smiles~